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Ok, the piano at the main beat and the trills were awesome!
nice chords and melodies and stuff!

But that doesn't cut it, you should work on your drums. Keep em diverse! And i believe you are using a drum loop considering it repeating very awkwardly.

The bass line synth coould have been much thicker but oh well.

pretty cool song lol

well this is some pretty dark dnb, all i think is some synths don't flow with this track :s

DjTrailblazer responds:

Thanks for the input, DnB isn't my usual affair. I mostly make house but I wanted to change pace.

Awesome composition, it certainly gives me the halloween feel! I love that harpis also!

WingoWinston responds:

Harpsichords are a must. Plus, it makes an alliteration with Halloween. Absolutely perfect both musically and grammatically. Thanks!

Ahh traditional newgrounds dance music lol.
good stuff, i hope it's even better when completed

kopacetic responds:

don't worry, it will

rad stuff in 3 hours lol. just imagine if you did take your time on it :D

Xyresic responds:

hoo boy

Aside from using drum and bass loops . why not make your own :)
It will allow you to make them diverse and not repetitive and would drag the listener in more.
the melody is ok but i feel like it could be enhanced more melody.
but good song overall :p

Gls responds:

I would like to make my OWN loops. That, if only I have good samples for it. ;_; And yeah, it's way too repetitive. This is just an experiment, after all.

well the synth choice in the beginning is kind of dull, this song needs allot more oomph and pizzaz to it. It has potential to be much better. Also the really high synth seems like it has too much on the high. The bass is ok but i think you could have increased it.
It sounds really dull , and empty in my opinion.

but work harder and try to add more into your productions and never try to make your stuff feel empty.

Don't take this review harsh :) I'm only trying to give some tips

Mastering is pretty fine.
But the 3 chord repetition at the beginning at the beat is pretty dull. I would get impatient with that. So vary that up a bit.
Also, when the beat does come in, at 0:38 when in reverts a chord down, i don't think that's a good chord to use. The F# makes is feel kind of awkward. But if you move some notes around in that chord you can make it sound better. It's good so far.

Not bad. Pretty good! Increase your mid on your snares just a bit.

Not my type of style but pretty good so far!

la-yinn responds:

I know my drums could be a lot better. I try my best but I've got shitty equipment. :(

Thanks for the review!

Production work is amazing! really love the backward instruments!!

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